Genevieve :P

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Wow. I really loved that. I'm usually into hating any reading that is non-fiction, and only ever read it because I have to. Your writing was different though, I really ...

Hey, I'm Gen. I'm going to review your work. Although you did a really good joy in your editing, I found a few typo's and have included them in my ...

Hey, I'm Gen. I'm going to review your work. I'll start with some nit-picking, and at the end will be my personal opinion and comment. The pebble was magical and ...

Hey, I'm Gen and it's a pleasure to be reviewing your work, I love it and it's a great start. I hope you keep going, and if you do, please ...

Ok, I'm Genevieve. I'm just doing a little nit-picking. It's pretty good, I'm not sure about continuing, because I'm not sure how you can continue the story and make it ...

I liked it, very descriptive, and well written. There wasn't really that much content and I'm wondering if that is the whole of chapter one, or just the introduction? Anyway ...

I liked it, though I'm not sure how a nine-year-old can know so much about every thing when she's only nine. And the older girl, how does she live upstairs ...

I hope you like my story. Let me know what you think, I don't care if your a mean reviewer, but please review. I wanna know what you all think. ...

Yeah I liked it, do you write the music too? I would love to hear the song, think it would sound awesome. To me it was a bit of an ...

Hi, I'm Gen :o I liked your story and I think you should continue, if you do I can't wait to read it. Although you said you have had it ...